Exploration essay plan

Introduction: Many countries in the world had sent their explorers out to found a new place or suck up experiences from others. That's called EXPLORATION. The countries got a large number of benefits after the exploration.



Thesis Statement: Exploration is important for countries because the country need suggestions from others to have a progression , it's helpful for the national economy and an propagate the spirit of persistence.







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Topic Sentence:Exploration is important for a country because the country need suggestions from others.



Body: When explorers went to another country or town, they would feel a big difference from its views, food or culture. They could realize that the rules or ways the other country's people use are more suitable and affective. Then, they can take those experience back to their own country and share with the people from the same or the master. It will be stronger and better when they improve with their country. Exploration can also help them to build a relationship that connect to other countries.



Concluding Sentence:It's important to learn from others' strong points and close the gap. The country will have a necessary progression after an exploration.







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Topic Sentence:It's good for the national economy of a country if their explorer found a reclaimable land that has endowed around but no one.



Body: The best result of an exploration is to find a new and endowed land that has no inhabitants. The explorers or their country can be the owner of that land and develop it to a scenic spot or just used for themselves. Anyway, they can get money or some other benefits. The people in their country can have a higher level of many sides in their life.



Concluding Sentence: Therefore, it's important to have an exploration for a country because it's useful to the national economy and can give people a better life.







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Topic Sentence: Exploration is necessary because it can runs propagate the spirit of persistent around the people in their country.



Body: For example, when the explorer John Cabot came back from the Indian land, he became famous intent. That's because the people of his country think he was a hero who can face a lot of trouble and finally accomplished his mission. The spirit of exploration sent out in the country and people want to shoe their bravery to win honour for their country. It's a positive attitude of life. People will adhere the explorers as a exemplary person and learn a lot from them.



Concluding Sentence: Hence, Exploration can shows a positive spirit to the common people in the country.

Conclusion:

Restatement of Thesis: All in all, exploration is important for countries because the country need experience from others to make a progression, it's helpful for the national economy and an propagate the spirit of persistence

Because of those sides of reasons, more and more countries sent their explorers to the world to have a experience of the exploration. Although the world is develop, this honorable traditional never lose. It's the symbol for the progression of the civilisation, by people challenging themselves.

Feeling

I'm in English10 class now and took the example of the provincal exam before I go to my blog.
It's a little hard for me...I can't REALLY imgine how can I do in the real exams....
That's bad.But I'll try my best to do it.

Exploration!

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www.planetary.org (I want to delete it)

All of these pictures are showing about the EXPLORATION~~

The first picture, there are two people climbing on a big snow mountain. They looks very hard doing their job. That's cool! I like snow and the nature with the mountains. Being with the fresh air and the fantastic view must be excited! but maybe they will face a lot of troubles and many different question...maybe the weather is really cold and there lived some aggressive animals that haven't have food for many days...That's terrible! I can't imagine what will happen if they meet they...Oh,I'm sorry...GOOD LUCK for them~~~

The next picture shows the place beside the sea. The people looks very strong and aggressive! Maybe they found a new land just now. They may feel excited when they arrived there,because they were sailing very hard to achieve the dream about EXPLORATION. It's seems like a very beautiful Iceland that they never knew. They were thinking to be famous with the great finding when they came back and took this good news to people in their country. The question is, who is the person that found it at the first time? How can they deal with many people say he was the owner of the land?That's really a severe question.

The place of the last picture is the ocean, too. The ocean enjoyed two big ships. Maybe it's similar with the second picture. It's has some ices on the sea! Maybe the people in the ship is finding the Iceland or ice mountain. The sea-exploration is important for a country because it's a sprirt of persistant. People in this country can learned a lot and be affect by people who came to found another place. They play an very good exemplary role in people this country. That's really important and they also can take many good things back for their country. A another place or some culter. It's very meaningful.

The Fur Trade

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www.hbc.com

http://www.prijatelji-zivotinja.hr/

All these pictures show me the Fur Trade.

The first one is about a baby seal lying in the white snow. Its black nose and little eyes are so cute! I love it~~Its body is as white as the snow around its. but..it looks not very happy. Maybe it's cold? The weather is so cold in the picture, I don't know if the seal could resist the cold weather. But I hope so.

The second picture has two ships of Fur Trade. The people in the ships sell carcass they found.
I think they are so cruel and cold hearted. I really hate the behavior they did. The animals were so poor and they never did something wrong. Some of them a just baby, but the people never think for them, just think about how can they get more money. That's horrible and more than I could bear.

The ship is sailing along the sea in the third picture. The people there looks very happy and excited. They have to pass the carcass in their boat to another place. Maybe they can get a lot of money instead of the fur trade. So they're sailing the ship very hard, because they looking forward to arrive quickly and quickly. In their eyes, the fur trade is nothing, only the money. I'm really exasperated with them. I hope their ship dead in the water and they can have a punish.

The fourth picture is the most cruelest one. The man is standing with fur trade in both of his hands. It's terrible and really hurtled my heart. It's unfair for the poor animals! They never did something wrong or bad for humans! The man is so bad that he doesn't repent, but even be prond of himself...I hate him forever!

There is a fur trade in the last picture. The animal might be cherish when it alive. But...it's dead!

Someone made it to a comfortable coat. The killer may get a lot of money by selling this fur trade. I feel very sad for the poor animal.....We should condemn those bad people who kill them together!!!

My week~~

Time goes by, it's the end of this week.

I really learned a lot in this sunny week~~The French Explorer named Jacques Cartier, John Cabot and something important about the story.....

The temperature is warmer and warmer now. Spring is coming~~ I love the season like these!

I realized that the provincial exam will be somewhat hard for me, and I only have 1 month to prepare! That's a difficult work, but I think I'll try my best.

The beautiful weekend is coming soon!! I'm soooooooo glad about it! I'll watch TV, Surf the Internet to watch movies and read novels!! I'm also looking forward to go for an outing with my family! Where will we go? Wherever is great, because I'm really happy to be with the beautiful nature!! The sunshine make me feel great!!!

I won't forget to study for the test on Tuesday....

I LOVE SUNSHINE! I LOVE WEEKEND! I LOVE MY FRIENDS! I LOVE FREE TIME!!!!

I love everything!!(except the test...)

Have a good weekend~~~~~~~

My Literary Essay

Various people in the world show their bravery in different ways. Some of them maybe immolated themselves to save a person. Others could just do something new that they never did before. However, in both "Sir Gawain and the Green Knight" and "the Sniper", the protagonists have a trait of bravery, even when they were facing death.



In the story "Sir Gawain and the Green Knight", Sir Gawain is a brave Protagonist who can step forward when facing trouble and keep his promise to the Green Knight. For instance, when the Green Knight cane to provoke the King Aurthur, Sir Gawain was not astounded as other Knights, but "step forward" and said "No one laughs at the Knights of the Round Table". He was brave enough to did what he asked with his confident voice. Thus, Sir Gawain was calm when facing the menace and be brave to retort the Green Knight perfectly. In addition, he was brave to hold his promise to the Green Knight. even he might never come back from the Green Castle. He didn't run away although the Lord Westall enticed him to escape, but just went as he promised. When the Lord always recommended him to "run for life","the Green knight killed everyone who goes near it.".......but even he said"you must escape mow, I'll help you". Sir Gawain still Kept the words he promised to the Green Knight one year ago. Hence, it means that Sir Gawain can adhere to his principles when there was a lure in front of him. In summary, Sir Gawain is a protagonist who has a trait of brave. He protected the King Aurthur even if someone enticed him, he never broke his heavy promise.



In the story "The Sniper", the Republican sniper is a brave protagonist who didn't recoil by the excoriated pain of the severe wound his enemy caused, and he can be calm to think of a ruse which was successful when facing death death. The sniper shows his bravery when he was injured deeply by the enemy. For example, when "the blood was oozing through the sleeve of his coat", he didn't recoil but "broke the neck of the iodine bottle and let the bitter fluid trip into the wound". It was extremely hurt and he was almost paralyzed. Thus, he is brave to resist the pain, not just lying down and wait for death. In addition, he is brave even when he was in the face of death and be calm to think of a good ruse to save himself. "His ruse had succeeded". This idea which flashed into his mind pulled him back from the death. Hence, even when he was wounded and facing danger, he can still kept a calm bream thought what should he do next, and never give up to his enemies and death.In summary, the sniper is a character who shows bravery when facing the antagonist, he didn't give up, contrarily be calm and thought of the strategic ruse in the story.


These two stories show there are examples of being brave. Both of the protagonists show their bravery to the audience, they deserved praiseful. However, there’re a large number of people in the world that are also showing bravery in the news or around life. All of them are gritty by the bravery, just like Sir Gawain and the sniper.

Jacques Cartier--The French Explorer

1. Post 2 pictures of Jacques Cartier and explain what you see in the pictures.What kind of man is he? What can you know from the pictures?

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Picture from etc.usf.edu

Jacques Cartier looks strong and old. I think he might always thought a lot of ruses during his trip to other countries and has many experience about leadership. Maybe everybody listening and flowing him.

His eyes have the gream of mature. It's very deep and thoughful. He is the man that always looking at venture and even death.

2. Post 10 facts about Jacques Cartier

·Jacques Cartier was born in St. Malo (France) in 1491. Not much is known of his life before 1534, when he departed on his first voyage.

·He was looking for a passage through or around North America to East Asia, as some had done before him, and many would after him.

·Jacques Cartier was a sea captain born int. Malo, France in 1491

·He was the first European to map, travel and attempt to establish a settlement in the northern St. Lawrence area

·Cartier's exploration was the base for France's claim to Canada

·For several years he voyages for discovery from Europe to America ceased.

·In 1541, his third expedition was put together to help Jean Roberval found a colony in Canada.

·Cartier never found the Northwest Passage, but his explorations served as a basis for the French claims in the rich St. Lawrence Valley and led to many future expeditions by France to Canada.

·His Major Accomplishment was discovered the St. Lawrence River.

·After that he became a highly respected navigato

·Some historians believe Cartier accompanied Giovanni de Verrazano on French expeditions to the New World.

3. Why is he important for the history of Canada?
Because he discovered the ST. Lawrence River.

4. When was Cartier sent to Canada? Why was he sent to explore? Who sent him?

He sent to Canada in 1534. Frence sent him to there.

5. Find a map of one of his voyages. Post it here and explain his voyage. Where did he go?

Picture from:www.canadiana.org

Part B: Let's watch some videos!

7. First Nations people were the original people who lived in Canada before the Europeans came. Imagine how you would feel seeing the Europeans for the first time. What would you think? What would you say? What would you do?

When I saw them in the video at the first time, I felt they were so shame. They wear nothing and didin't know how to talk to peopie and what the world looks like. Maybe I would bring something from the world outside and tell him about the life that they never seen. I would make friends with them.

8. Watch these two videos and answer the questions.

What did you learn from this video in 5-8 sentences?

I learned a lot from this video.

What is scurvy? Find a picture of scurvy and post it on your blog.

9. What happened to Donnaconna?

Donnaconna was the chief of the native people. He was very angry when Jacques Cartier who came from French built a cross on their land. Then he was asked to go to French by Jacques Cartier. Then, he never went back to India.

10. How would you feel if you were Donnaconna or the Iroquois people? Would you be friends with the French after this experience?
I would feel vrey annoyed with Jacques Cartier and his men if I am the Iroquois people. Because they were so overbearing to take anything they want, but don't care other people's feeling. It's unfair for us. I would not be friends with the French afer this experience.

Read page 221-222 of your textbook. The information on these pages are important.Find the words in bold on these two pages. Translate them and write a new sentence with them using your own words. Post it here.
Find some more stamps with Jacques Cartier on them and post it here!

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John Carbot

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Question1 Find two pictures of John Cabot, post it and Describe his appearance in 3-5 sentences

John Cabot was standing at the Viking Ship in the bigger picture. He looks somewhat old but mature. I think he was very stronge and tall. He was wering a orange .... that he seems comfident.

In the smaller picture John Cabot is asking his follower to do something important. He might be a very actice master and always do well in leadership.

2. Who is John Cabot? Tell me ten facts (real information) about him.

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1 John Cabot (about 1450-1499) was an Italian-born English explorer and navigator.

2 In Italy, he is known as Giovanni Caboto (which is his original name).

3 Cabot was born in Italy but moved to England in 1495.

4 At the request of King Henry VII of England, Cabot sailed to Canada in 1497, commanding the small ship called "Matthew."

5 Cabot landed near Labrador, Newfoundland, or Cape Breton Island on June 24, 1497.

6 One of John Cabot's three sons, the explorer Sebastian Cabot, accompanied him on this trip. Cabot claimed the land for England.

7 Cabot explored the Canadian coastline and named many of its islands and capes. The mission's purpose was to search for a Northwest passage across North America to Asia (a seaway to Asia). Cabot was unsuccessful, although he thought that he had reached northeastern Asia.

8 Cabot undertook a second, larger expedition in 1498. On this trip, Cabot may have reached America, but that is uncertain.

9 Cabot's expeditions were the first of Britain's claims to Canada.

10 John Cabot died in England in 1499.

3. Why is he important to Canadian history?

Because John Cabot explored North America for England in 1497 he sailed to what is now eastern Canada. There is some controversy as to where he landed. He disappeared at sea in 1498.

4. Why did he leave Europe?

Because Spain and Portugal were not interested in Cabots ideas So he want to leave Europe to find China or Japen

5. What happened to John Cabot?

With a great sense of adventure, John Cabot approached the kings of Spain and Portugal for sponsorship that would enable him to get an expedition together to similarly explore a new route to the orient by sailing west.

Cabot had met many English merchants trading in the Mediterranean, and there was a large Italian community at that time in Bristol, so he decided to go to England and seek sponsorship from King Henry VII

Cabot left Bristol on his ship the Matthew and sailed west with the intention of finding China or Japan.

Instead, he discovered the “New Founde Landes” which we now know of course as Newfoundland, Canada.

He and his companions then set sail south, travelling over nine hundred miles down the east coast of north America before turning east and back to England

Arriving back in Bristol on August 5th 1497, he was acclaimed as a hero by his sponsors and became a major celebrity in Bristol. The King was extremely pleased to hear of Cabot’s adventures and paid him 10 for his discovery of the “new founde landes” and suggested that Cabot make a return journey to find out more of the new continent

Sadly, John Carbot did not return from the second expedition...We don't know the reason of his death.He may have perished in a storm, or hit an iceberg. That's too bad!

That's the end of John Carbot.

6. When John Cabot reached Newfoundland's Grand Banks, he was surprised to find the large supply of cod.

Find a picture of cod and post it up on your blog

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7. Watch this clip. What did you learn from the video clip? Write 5-8 sentences.

I learned a lot from this video.

Cristoforo Colombo is the moet important person who affects John Carbot. After Colombo coming back from serching New Land, John wanted it, too.

He lesded his Viking Ship for a month and foud a beautiful land called Newfoundland as we konw in Canada.

He became a hero when he came back. People loved him.

But he dead during his second expedition. Nobody konws why and when....

That's a kind of tragedy.

Bonus1. What does his ship "Mathew" look like? Post a picture and include the web address where you got it from.
picture from cmhg-phmc.gc.ca

My favorite Viking Ship!

I found it in Baidu..

It's a soooooo0 beauitful viking ship~~The enviroment around it it's quite nice, the sun is falling down of the mountain and black clouds covering the sky.....

I like it!

but...................

My favoriteeeeeeeeee viking ship is the ship that made my our group!!!!It's very coulorful and creative!! I'm proud of it~~~

mI played typing games just now! That's cool. I believe my typing skill will improve quickly!hahaha

I'm going to have lunch later!! My stomach is making noisy.............

Smile Shouter

First, let me show you about my beautiful weekend...
Warm and sunny Saturday found my whole family going for an outing in the park. I was really really enjoy the time with my parents and grandparents. We had a wonderful walk and talked happily in that afternoon. That was cool! I kept the new camera with me which my dad bought from TaiWan, and took a large number of photos.
To my surprise, the camera has a function named "smile shouter", that means if you're smiling, it will take a picture for you wuithout any human's work. Each of us storod in front of it and smiled as happy as we can...That's really a hard challenge, but wherever we went,we left a trail of warmness behind us.
I came into an English train on Sunday. I wondered learning English is of difficulty of one kand or another, but I can get out of difficulty in one way or another. Although I may err at one time or another. ( It's sounds like a Tongue Twister=v =）

Today, the new week is coming. Although I was somewhat drowsy, I assure myself with get a good mark in the provinal and stick to my dream!
I'm not be asked to be in the spotlight, but I should try my beat.
My learning-heart is at large! It's everything I can do about my English!!!!

My best friends always told some jesting with me. I feel lucky to meet those guys who has crystal-like eyes and child-like simplicity...
I love you all!!!
Good night and have a sweetdream~~~~~~

(Ms.Chan, I don't like the test that we're going to have tomorrow...I think I can represent all the students in 10A to say that...)

Our Viking Ship!!

OHYEAH! Tiday is Friday! I'm so excited that forgot what to write.........

Ok. Now I am going to show you the viking ship that we made in Canadian Studies.....That's interesting and cool.....

I put them in the left side.....

Do you think it's all made from newspaper?

I really enjoyed working with my group. We were thinking when we shared ideas with others.

OK! Enjoy your weekend!

Not sunny but nice...

Today is cloudy，but I still feel nice at school.....
Because....we didn't have any test.....I hope "no test life" will go on forevermore!
but....maybe.....

I'm happy that I got 32/35 on my vacabulary test. I will try to do better next time~~
I like taking PE really much now, because I enjoy having a walk with ninasang and mimisang and telling stories with them..That makes me feel comfortable~~

I'm not really ready for the provinal exams..I think that miht be a little for me....I'll try my best!
Thanks~~~~

Welcome to my English blog!!

HOHO,I'm happy to have my first blog which will be written in English!
I think I'll use it to improve my English~~~~~

Nothing special today, but I'm happy and laughing all the time with my best friends Ninasang and xiaomi.....Thanks all of you!
I love you!!!!!
That's all............................