Monday, April 13, 2009

(:part 1---My Essay Plan

Introduction: In many countries, Exploration is a tradition culture of showing bravery and powerful. Exploration discovered the new land and native people, it brings money amd experience to coutries and their explorer. In the other side, exploration can also be bad mostly because of the native people. So,


Thesis Statement: Exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding because the native people feel inplite when someone strange encroach on them, they want to counterattack and people never know the culture of each other.





Body paragraph 1


Topic sentence: Exploration csn create misunderstanding because the native people may feel inplite if someone strange intrude them.
body: Although most of xplorers were coming to fing something new, it can make misunderstanding from the native people, they may think they want to throw them away and be the master of their land because of the gun or armaments they take. The way they want to keep and protect their home is war. They may going to fight and expel them back when they don't know what's going on.
Hence, it means exploration can cause miscouceive by the people from others.

Body paragraph 2

Topic sentence: Eploration can also brings conflict between two groups of people because the way that the native paople want to keep and protect their homeland is war. They may going to flght and expel them back when they don't know what's going on. So, when they starting flghting, the people who are new there may feel unfair and uncomfortable, they must going to fight back. That will make a cycle and never end. Both if them may have an unhappy ending and get nothing but hurt.
Thus, conflict is come from misunderstanding before, it will develop worth and worth sfter start because the native people want to protect their land and don't want anybody conquer.

Body paregragh 3

Topic sentence: Exploration is not always good because people never know the culture of each other.
body: One reason that cause misunderstanding of the native people is the action or saying of the adventitious people. They may not know the traditional courtesy and annoy the native people in the way they don't know. The native people will feel bad of the displeasing and want to expel them back.
The misunderstanding and conflict is easy to cause because the difference between two countries.

Conclusion: Therefore, Exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding because the native people feel displease when someone strange encroach on them, they want to countersttack and people never know the difference between their countries.
Now, more and more countries want their explorers going to discover the new lands.However, it has the other side that shows not always smooth. So, the countries should think about both sides and deciede carefully. Then, they'll get success, if not, they will get nothing from itdamnify.

1 comment:

  1. It looks like your essay, is it really a plan? :P

    10/10 Good!

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