In many countries, Exploration is a tradition culture of showing bravery and powerful. Exploration discovered the new land and native people, it brings money and experience to countries and their explorer. In the other side, exploration can also be bad mostly because of the native people. So,Exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding because the native people feel impolite when someone strange encroach on them, they want to counterattack and people never know the culture of each other
Exploration can create misunderstanding because the native people may feel impolite if someone strange intrude them. Although most of explorers were coming to find something new, it can make misunderstanding from the native people, they may think they want to throw them away and be the master of their land because of the gun or armaments they take. They want to keep their Cherish and something important. Hence, it means exploration can cause misconceive by the people from others.
Exploration can also brings conflict between two groups of people because the way that the native people want to keep and protect their homeland is war. They may going to flight and expel them back when they don't know what's going on. So, when they starting fighting, the people who are new there may feel unfair and uncomfortable, they must going to fight back. That will make a cycle and never end. Both if them may have an unhappy ending and get nothing but hurt.Thus, conflict is come from misunderstanding before, it will develop worth and worth after start because the native people want to protect their land and don't want anybody conquer.
Exploration is not always good because people never know the culture of each other.body: One reason that cause misunderstanding of the native people is the action or saying of the adventitious people. They may not know the traditional courtesy and annoy the native people in the way they don't know. The native people will feel bad of the displeasing and want to expel them back.The misunderstanding and conflict is easy to cause because the difference between two countries.
Therefore, Exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding because the native people feel displease when someone strange encroach on them, they want to counterattack and people never know the difference between their countries.Now, more and more countries want their explorers going to discover the new lands.However, it has the other side that shows not always smooth. So, the countries should think about both sides and decide carefully. Then, they'll get success, if not, they will get nothing from indemnify.
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