Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Exploration Is Important To Countries

Rena Hu

Exploration Is Important To Countries

_____Many countries in the world had sent their explorers out to found a new place or suck up experiences from others. That's called EXPLORATION. The countries got a large number of benefits after the exploration. Exploration is important for countries because the country need suggestions from others to have a progression, it's helpful for the national economy and a propagate the spirit of persistence.
_____Exploration is important for a country because the country need suggestions from others. When explorers went to another country or town, they would feel a big difference from its views, food or culture. They could realize that the rules or ways the other country's people use are more suitable and affective. Then, they can take that experience back to their own country and share with the people from the same or the master. It will be stronger and better when they improve with their country. Exploration can also help them to build a relationship that connects to other countries. It's important to learn from others' strong points and close the gap. The country will have a necessary progression after an exploration.
_____It's good for the national economy of a country if their explorer found a reclaimable land that has endowed around but no one. The best result of an exploration is to find a new and endowed land that has no inhabitants. The explorers or their country can be the owner of that land and develop it to a scenic spot or just used for themselves. Anyway, they can get money or some other benefits. The people in their country can have a higher level of many sides in their life. Therefore, it's important to have an exploration for a country because it's useful to the national economy and can give people a better life.
_____Exploration is necessary because it can run propagate the spirit of persistent around the people in their country. For example, when the explorer John Cabot came back from the Indian land, he became famous intent. That's because the people of his country think he was a hero who can face a lot of trouble and finally accomplished his mission. The spirit of exploration sent out in the country and people want to shoe their bravery to win honors for their country. It's a positive attitude of life. People will adhere the explorers as an exemplary person and learn a lot from them. Hence, Exploration can show a positive spirit to the common people in the country.

_____All in all, exploration is important for countries because the country need experience from others to make a progression, it's helpful for the national economy and propagate the spirit of persistence, because of those sides of reasons, more and more countries sent their explorers to the world to have an experience of the exploration. Although the world is develop, this honorable traditional never lose. It's the symbol for the progression of the civilizations, by people challenging themselves.
Questions:
1. What is your puppet show about? (5-8 sentences)
Our puppet show is about the explorer John Cabot, we show the experiences, beginning and the end of his Journey. Include he went to visit the kind and asked for money, how he got on well with solids( told stories), and finally arrived in "Asia" he thought. Even he had talked to a fish. All of these are wonderful and interesting! We used a lot of funny words and place in our puppet show! We are looking forward to show it in class!
2.. Who are the characters? Which student is the voice of the character?
We have Cabot, the king, three solids, Cabot's lover, Marmara, the Indian king, and common people in our show. Nina voiced Cabot and one of the solid, Jessie voice the king and one of the solids, the other solid and the fish are voiced by Angela. I contracted the Indian king and common people. I feel happy to play the music and hold the toil for my team.
3. What did you learn from making the puppet show? (3-5 sentences)
I learned a lot from our puppet show. Include many about Cabot that I never know. The most important I learned is about teamwork. I feel lucky working in our group and shared ideas with them.
4. What do you want me to notice when I am marking your puppet show? (3-5 sentences)
Maybe you can image how we're feel when making this beautiful puppet show. We laughing and thinking all the time. We really put a lot of addition on it. Everyday when class was over we went to Nina's home (nearest school) to make it and try our best to make it more brilliant. We hope Everyone will love it and learned from it.
5. Did your group work well together? Tell me 3 reasons why or why not.
YES!! Because we are a GROUP with a lovely girls. Because we can learn a lot when thinking and working together. Because we want to do BEST!! We are all TOGETHER and never be part!!
Bonus- Post a picture of your puppet show on your blog.
( I will do it later)

1 comment:

  1. Focus - 4/4
    You have a clear purpose and a strong point of view.

    Organization - 4/4
    Clear spacing
    Comprehensive conclusion
    All of your body paragraphs relate to your thesis

    Content - 4/4
    You explain development of your ideas. You explain how your body paragraphs connect to the topic.

    Usage 3/4
    Be careful with informal Language – “suck up”
    “a propogate” is incorrect – are you using it as a verb?
    Don’t sound like you are talking – “That’s called”

    Style 3/4

    1.Try to use other words instead of “good”
    2.“just use it”
    3. Use different ways you begin your sentences.
    4. Use higher level vocabulary words

    Total Mark

    18/20 x 2 - 36/40

    Excellent job! You are really working hard and I can tell you put a lot of thought into your essay. I am glad you work hard in class because I can make sure you are on the right idea!

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